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swissmarg ([personal profile] swissmarg) wrote in [community profile] 221b_recs2012-08-18 01:22 pm

Fic Rec: Renegades

Title: Renegades
Author: [livejournal.com profile] augustbird
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Length: 39,405 words
Rating: Explicit
Warnings: Non-canon character death, dub-con
Verse: BBC Sherlock
Author's summary: Sherlock Holmes takes down Moriarty’s syndicate. He also takes John Watson with him. AU of The Reichenbach Fall.

Reccer's comments: If you're up for a stark, gritty, unapologetic, pull-no-punches road trip, this is one of the best offerings post Series 2. As the summary says, it is an AU of Episode 3, beginning with the 'we're going to need to coordinate' scene. From there, rather than meeting Moriarty on the roof of St Bart's, Sherlock and John go on the run together under the aliases of Benedict and Martin ;). Their journey takes them from the sweaty, seamy underworld of drug dealers in Pennsylvania to the middle of a turf war among drug smugglers in the American Southwest to the high-tech world of computer espionage in Shanghai.

The main plot was clearly planned with great care and peppered with realistic details that set the scenes perfectly. I felt like I was right there with the characters every step of the way. There are interesting original supporting characters, and even a cameo by Irene. When the climax comes, it is a true stroke of genius worthy of the world's greatest detective. However, take note that there are unabashed depictions of drug use, torture, and murder which some readers may find disturbing.

A secondary but no less gripping subplot is the developing relationship between Sherlock and John. When they set out, their relationship is as depicted in the series: close friends, but nothing more. As their odyssey plays out and Sherlock is drawn further down into the grip of his inner demons, things become clear to both of them that lead them to admit their deeper feelings for each other.

Excerpt:
John hates it—hates himself—and he hates the way his voice breaks when he asks, “Are you okay?”

“I’m fine,” Sherlock says, so quietly that John barely hears it, “Go back to bed. I’ll be back in a second.”

John wants to say no. John wants to wrap his arms around Sherlock’s waist, wants to put his face into the space between Sherlock’s shoulder blades, wants to take away every bad memory that Sherlock’s ever had. He wants to press himself into Sherlock until they bleed together, until Sherlock has conclusive evidence of how much he fills the empty spaces inside John.


Love is not a strong enough word.

“Okay,” John says and it hurts him more than anything but he turns around and slips back under the covers because it’s what Sherlock needs.

No one comes out unscathed, but the ending is emotionally fulfilling and forward-looking. Another page-turner that you'll want to clear the evening for.

[identity profile] girlonadragon.livejournal.com 2012-08-18 12:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant, I hadn't realised this was finished! I love everything augustbird has done, and I've really enjoyed what I've read so far, so I'm looking forward to seeing how this ends up.

[identity profile] holyfant.livejournal.com 2012-08-18 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Yesss. *rubs hands* Have been waiting for this to be finished.

[identity profile] pennswoods.livejournal.com 2012-08-18 02:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I devoured this just yesterday. Unbelievably good and unflinching. So glad to see it being rec'ed over here, and that quote really encapsulates so much of the 'love' in this piece.

[identity profile] opaljade.livejournal.com 2012-08-18 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm looking forward to reading this, swissmarg. I always enjoy your recs!

[identity profile] teahigh.livejournal.com 2012-08-18 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
One of the most intense post-fall fics I've read yet. Love it. :)

[identity profile] chapbook.livejournal.com 2012-08-19 06:20 am (UTC)(link)
In the middle of reading this and I wanted to support your rec. So far I'm enjoying the level of tension. Well I say "enjoy", but really my face more resembles this: 8O

[identity profile] ningen-demonai.livejournal.com 2012-08-19 09:50 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY GOD IT'S FINISHED?!

Yessss, come to me, awesome fic that hurts my heart.

[identity profile] augustbird.livejournal.com 2012-08-19 06:13 pm (UTC)(link)
askdjfaksld oh man i think this is the most detailed rec i've ever received and i can't tell you how much i appreciate it! i'm like actually flailing at my computer screen right now, THANK YOU SO MUCH <33333